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Kendo no Go
In the Language of Kendo:
A Fanfic in 100 Chapters


by Akai Kitsune

50: Stomach

 

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There were three things Kaoru recalled vividly about her return from Enishi's island: Megumi's fears over Kenshin's wounds, both old and new, the uneasy glances each of her friends continually sent in her direction, and how thin and pale Kenshin had become.

It had been over three weeks since she last saw him, and, as his gi was removed to help Megumi in her work, she noticed the startling changes. He had always been slender - she was proud of that trait in him, how he could be so frightfully strong with so little bulk - but it had never been this bad. His ribs showed clearly beneath the fresh coats of sweat and blood, as if he had sucked in his breath and forgotten to exhale, leaving his chest high, his belly empty and wanting. As it was, his breathing was too ragged to allow such an act.

It was terrifying.

She wondered what he had done to himself, what Enishi could have said or done that would force him to the level of starvation, so deep were his feelings at her kidnapping. She wished she had fought harder against Enishi, delayed longer, tried more to escape, to keep her rurouni from experiencing such pain. She knew, deep down, that there was nothing she could have done; knew, and felt worse because of it.

 

Afterwards, she had to work hard to help him regain his lost weight. He admitted to her, once, that he had eaten better since the Kamiya dojo became a real home for him than in all his wandering years combined, no matter who was cooking. She'd thought about that for a long time, wondering sadly how often, how long he had been without food, because of his status of unemployment. He had once said humourlessly to Yahiko that, glamourous as it may seem from distance, the job of a wanderer was hardly sought after. Better to be samurai, dojo samurai, even though the class was abolished and swords were banned.

"In your heart, in your soul," he had murmured, "Once you become a true swordsman, you will remain that was until death."

Kaoru shivered at the words, thinking and asking silently if Kenshin knew how close his advice was to the dying words of Jin'ei.

"A hitokiri is only that until death..."

She noticed - though Yahiko did not, in his excitement at receiving such rare, offered advice - that Kenshin did not use term "samurai" when referring to himself. She had never visualized Kenshin to be anything but samurai; he was so strong, to regal and fierce at times, his actions alone deserved the title.

But he was not a born samurai, was simply given a name, a daisho, and sent to a samurai's work. She often wondered if he had ever truly been a child.

Peasant, slave, samurai. But a child?

Which led her to the thought that he had always been so small, so scrawny, so thin. It was a heartbreaking thought.

 

After their marriage, she marveled at how flat and hard his stomach was, the well-toned flesh and muscle like carved iron in the dancing lamplight. She liked to lay her head on his chest, running her hand across his skin, until his hand came up to intertwine his fingers through hers, amused, but sensitive to her tickling motion. He was also, she recalled, incredibly shy of his scars, however unvoiced those feelings were.

Well, she didn't care about them as much as he thought she might - enough, perhaps, to recognize that they were part of him and could never be removed - but he was so giving of everything else, so she couldn't begrudge him this one thing.

 

Kaoru hated being fat. It made her uncomfortable, overly sensitive, and sometimes, a bit violent. As such, she was not a very good pregnant lady at times. She had to admit that her pregnancy was not as bad as many of the town ladies had boasted. She was ill, but not constantly; stiff, but not unbearably so; tired, but relieved of any and all workload thanks to her husband's care and generous nature. Yet the weight of a child was much harder to bear than she had previously anticipated.

'With the two of us being so small, usually,' she thought crossly, gazing at her ever-increasing berth, 'How in the world is this one so big?'

During her pregnancy, she was terribly envious of Kenshin's unchanging waist, his cheerful, energetic step as he moved around the dojo, in comparison to her slow, impaired waddle. But he was the man, the father - what changes should be expected of him? Certainly not what she was gaining.

Gradually she began to realize that Kenshin's increased liveliness and overjoyed attitude was not simply to spite her own foul mood - a thought she blamed on her unbalanced hormones - but, instead, to show the world how immensely happy he was at the sight - indeed, the very thought - that she was with child, his child, and he was doing what he could to make that fact as comfortable for her as possible.

And he, while she could not say the same for a certain skinny, teenaged pupil of hers, had never once called her fat. Even in the final days before her son's birth, he smiled sincerely and called her beautiful, so honestly that she truly, deeply believed him.

Even when her stomach stuck out a foot in front of her.

Beautiful.

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The chapter title was left unchanged.

WAI! Halfway there, can you believe it?! I almost can't, ^_^ But I'm working hard and doing my best, so I'll keep at it.

I'd like to thank everyone who has supported me thus far. All you reviewers have made this fic worthwhile. Without your help I'd probably have stopped a long time ago. A special thank you definitely goes to Calger-san, who has taken the time to faithfully review nearly every chapter. You're awesome, ^_^

I'd also like to make a (hesitant) announcement. A few of you out there asked if I'd write further than 100 chapters. Because it's a parody, I figured it was only a remote possibility unless I found a book that was written in a similar way.

Will you believe I found one? You find the strangest things in old shops at the cottage, ^_^ And this is a bit different - a full 141 chapters, shorter, but hopefully just as inspirational as the original. It's a slim possibility, since I have no idea if I'll even get that far with Kendo, and I haven't read the book yet. But you never know, and it's something to think about, ^_~
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